Jay
Porter has been suing the massive corporations of Texas and the southern United
States for over 20 years. As the book opens in 1996 he is barely practising law.
Since his wife, Bernie, died from a lingering illness a year earlier he has
lost the drive that made him a very successful lawyer. He has spent a lot of
time since her death brooding about the time he spent away from home trying cases.
Jay,
his teenage daughter Ellie, and pre-teen son Ben are trying hard to adjust to
life without Bernie. I had a catch in my throat as they dealt with a tree for
Christmas.
He
has gradually reduced his caseload to a single class action against a giant
chemical company. Two explosions at the ProFerma plant caused massive
destruction in Pleasantville. While a huge action Jay is going through the
motions. The case is barely moving.
Beyond
the court action the major news in Pleasantville is the pending election for
Houston mayor. Alex Hathorne, son of Pleasantville patriarch Sam “Sunny”
Hathorne, is in a run-off as he seeks to
become the first black mayor of Houston.
It
is a fiercely contested election with District Attorney, Sandy Wolcott, challenging
Hathorne. She is aided by political operative, Reese Parker, who is pioneering
the aggressive tactics that put George W. Bush in the White House four years
later.
The
investigation into the murder is proceeding slowly when Axel’s campaign chair,
his nephew Neal Hathorne, is summoned for questioning. Unwilling to explain
where he was when Nowell was taken Neal is charged with murder.
Is
the prosecution politically motivated? Is Houston’s elite ready for a black man
to lead the city?
A
reluctant Jay takes on Neal’s defence. He has not handled criminal law since
early in his legal career. He opens the proceeding with a clever application
that puts the prosecution on the defensive.
Locke
creates an interesting trial but it is not a strong case against Neal. To me,
as a lawyer, I was surprised Neal was prosecuted on the evidence described in
the book. It is a dilemma facing all writers who write about a trial.
Overwhelming evidence and there is no credible defence. Too weak and the result
is inevitable. I doubt many readers will notice the strength of the State’s case
in Pleasantville except where the
issue is noted in the book.
With
relatively weak evidence Locke has the case take an unusual, even bizarre twist
that was the weakest point of the book. Locke, a television producer and writer
including the series Empire, appears
to have felt the need to add a jolt of drama that was unneeded. It was the only
moment in the book when I felt I was reading a scene from an American
television show. Overall, I was impressed with Locke’s skill in writing a legal
mystery when she is not a lawyer.
I
focused on Jay. The 46 year old is dealing with a profound personal loss while
raising two children and maintaining his law practice. I can relate to his
situation. It is hard to meet the demands of being a lawyer when your mind is
not on your files.
What
made the book special was Pleasantville. It is far from the ghetto. I cannot
recall reading another book about a prosperous black (the book uses black
rather than African American) community. My next post will discuss
Pleasantville. The setting is crucial to the plot.
Locke
drew me into life in Pleasantville and the lives of its residents.
I'm so very glad you enjoyed this, Bill. I agree with you that Locke really created an effective setting and atmosphere. And honestly, I like Jay Porter's character. I found your comments about the merits of the legal case really interesting. It really is a difficult balance, I think, trying to make a case both credible and of interest.
ReplyDeleteMargot: Thanks for the comment. Jay is interesting. I am going to look for the earlier book Locke has written with Jay as a younger lawyer.
DeleteI was glad Jay changed during the plot's unfolding and became more attentive to his children.
ReplyDeleteI hope Attica Locke continues this series.
Kathy D.: Thanks for the comment. I am going to look for a copy of the first book with Jay Porter.
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